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Post by αℓℓı on Sept 6, 2009 17:32:25 GMT -5
Oh, what's this? A new story? When you should be doing other things, Alli? We're ashamed. You know that? We're utterly ashamed.
;-; I know.
Gindy's Bakery is a quaint, attractive little building. It homes it's three owners in the second floor, and the entire first floor is devoted to the patrons. Annette, a mere thirty years old, and her son--Devlin, seventeen--and daughter, Molly--thirteen--live there. While Molly goes to school, mother and son run the popular little bakery that is seated right next to a new and prospering Church.
About half an hour away, walking, is the seediest part of the suburban area; three clubs clustered together within five blocks of each other--called "the clubs" by pretty much everyone--hold tons of drug dealers, junkies, pimps, and whores. Release is the most junkie-filled; cops are terrified of the owner, whom is extremely rich and contributes much to the police fund. He is friends with the owners of Go-A-Go and Curtsy, the other two clubs, so they are protected, as well. Go-A-Go is more respectable, and is more like an old fashioned cabaret. Curtsy is known for being the favored place among lesbians, but tons of gays go there, as well. A lot of straight men will go there hoping to get some hot babes--the word lesbian doesn't quite register any meaning upon their little brains. Deep within hype dream drug scene is Asher Nickels, a sixteen-year-old; for him, being a hooker is in his blood.
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chapter1 - How Things Stand
::more to come.
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Post by αℓℓı on Sept 6, 2009 17:42:12 GMT -5
Current Chapter
Chapter One - How Things Stand
Click Here
September 6th, 2009
I'm posting it on a secure site. You will be able to read it there. I'm sharing it with you guys because I love you and want some feedback. Tell me if any information doesn't match up from chapter to chapter (when I upload more chapters). Also, you guys are my editors, in a way. If you see anything messed up with these, please post here. I'll be posting all new ones here and noting when new chapters are up in a post.
I will also be posting this on Fictionpress.net eventually. Any notes I put at the top or bottoms of these are meant for them, not you guys. Your notes will go in these posts. All chapters will be posted on scribd.
Again, please feel free to post here--whether to tell me I messed something up and what it was so that I can fix it, or if you just want to say something about the story, like how lame it is. ;D
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